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Simple Sin : Parts 1 and 2; Chapters 1-14
Topic Started: Mar 24 2009, 10:02 PM (1,273 Views)
Vaxis Jul 16 2009, 03:45 AM Post #31
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 Updated. Whereas the last chapter was Q recapping and and elaborating on the current Olympus, this is Lotus recapping her own situation. Some very confusing conversation ensues. It really reflects some of the serious conversations that happened when we played the Mafia Game. Hopefully, first-person recapping is over for now and I can stay in the present tense. So far, I'm happy with my Part 2, and I think I'm getting better at actually forcing myself to write. Sucks about the character I killed off, but certainly, it's a story about death and such. Not everyone can survive a Mafia invasion!

Look forward to more stuff involving the 4 Mafia, the Olympians, and Acolyte and Lulu. Maybe even Alpha. I also will eventually have to elaborate on the two characters mentioned at the end of chapter 12. Darkmar is going to be a major character. I will eventually work in the rest, like kamigy (his name is from an area in Japan, like Akiba from MGS4!) and ASB (hard to think of a story name here...), and even Chidori (I'll call him Tolumax). As for this "Jack Silver", he's the only character not based on a user, except for one of the original Olympians. You'll see what is influence is, exactly.
Edited by Vaxis, Jul 16 2009, 04:13 AM.
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Lotus Jul 16 2009, 09:21 PM Post #32
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Yay! Another chapter. It seems like you have got quite a bit planned out. I look forward to future chapters, as usual.
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